Friday, May 7, 2010

Smoldering

Beneath the cold, white-gray ash
one more piece of
burning oak lies
hidden

remnants of lines
of woodflesh
old pathways
for water persist
burning orange
hot
not seen until
the ashes are stirred,
mixed, turned

unveiling
a smoldering
nugget
burning unchecked.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Lovely. If it weren't for you, I wouldn't be reading poetry, and I really like poetry. This one I read many times.

qmama said...

felt this deep in my body. total visceral response. beautiful.